I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2012–1–1 IETF LC End Date: 2012–1–4 IESG Telechat date: 2012-1-5 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.2 “Type and VSS Information -- see Section 35” should be 3.5 2. In section 3.3 “This sub-option only only” 3. In 3.5 last bullet not clear - “and the length of the MUST be 1.” |
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