Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

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Document: draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Review Date: 2011-10-18
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-20
IESG Telechat date: 2011-10-20

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- Section 3.4 reads:

   Section 2.1.1 of [RFC5322] limits lines to 998 characters and
   recommends that the lines be restricted to only 78 characters.  This
   specification changes the former limit to 988 octets.
          bbb                                ^^^

I wonder if there is an error in the third line and the text should say "... limit to 998 octets" rather than "988". Otherwise, I can't explain the 988 figure.


Idnits has a number of complaints:

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :

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  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC5335,
but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

  -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC2045, but
the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

-- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC5322, but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard

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  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational draft:
     draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis (ref. 'I-D.ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis')

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 5598



Other than that, the document looks good.

/Miguel


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Miguel A. Garcia
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