On Oct 14, 2011, at 6:14 AM, Barry Leiba wrote: >>>>> He's not talking about the filename; the short title is what's printed >>>>> at the top of every page. It comes from the "abbrev" parameter in the >>>>> "title" element in the XML. It can be changed with an RFC Editor >>>>> note. >> >> The sponsoring AD would like to know what is desired in the RFC Editor note: >> What would you like the short title to be? "CFBL Recommendations"? > > Yes, that's consistent with the main title. Agreed. > I think those are reasonable compromises, but, of course, I can't > speak for J.D. I suggest moving the second paragraph of the Abstract > into a new "Introduction" section that comes first in the body (new > Section 1). Put the footnote [1] to MAAWG there, and then put the > "about MAAWG" text in the footnote. Everyone understand that? Makes > sense? I think that works better than putting it in the Acks. I'm okay with either, with a slight preference for including it in the Acknowledgements section. MAAWG understands that this kind of boilerplate is unusual for IETF documents. Should I submit a new draft with these changes? -- J.D. Falk the leading purveyor of industry counter-rhetoric solutions _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf