I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dual-stack-lite-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011–4–10 IETF LC End Date: 2011–4–12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as standard track RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1.&
bsp; In section 8.3 NAT-44 appears without any reference or terminology expansion. 2. In section 8.5 “liefetime” should be “lifetime” 3. I am not sure what the recommendation in section 8.5 is. Is keep alive required or using PCP is recommended. |
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