Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-xcon-ccmp-12.txt> (Centralized Conferencing Manipulation Protocol) to Proposed Standard

[Mykyta Yevstifeyev <evnikita2@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hello,

Let me briefly comment IANA considerations sub-sections, that define two registries.

See my comments in-line.

12.5.  CCMP Protocol Registry

   This document requests that the IANA create a new registry for the
   CCMP protocol including an initial registry for operation types and
   response codes.

12.5.1.  CCMP Message Types

   The CCMP messages are described in Section 4.1 and defined in the XML
   schema in Section 11.  The following summarizes the requested

  registry:

   Related Registry:   CCMP Message Types Registry

   Defining RFC:  RFC XXXX [NOTE TO IANA/RFC-EDITOR: Please replace XXXX
      with the RFC number for this specification.]

   Registration/Assignment Procedures:  New CCMP message types are
      allocated on a specification required basis.

Here you should have the normative reference to RFC 5226.

   Registrant Contact:  IETF, XCON working group, (xcon@xxxxxxxx), Mary
      Barnes (mary.ietf.barnes@xxxxxxxxx).

As far as I may see, this registry definition does not conform to that described by RFC 5226.  Particularly, there are no description of the format of the registry and its entries as well as some other information, required by that document.  See here:  http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5226#section-4.2

   This section pre-registers the following initial CCMP message types:
  [ ... ]

12.5.2.  CCMP Response Codes

Here the same as above apply.

   The following summarizes the requested registry for CCMP Response
   codes:

   Related Registry:   CCMP Response Code Registry

   Defining RFC:  RFC XXXX [NOTE TO IANA/RFC-EDITOR: Please replace XXXX
      with the RFC number for this specification.]

   Registration/Assignment Procedures:  New response codes are allocated
      on a first-come/first-serve basis with specification required.

   Registrant Contact:  IETF, XCON working group, (xcon@xxxxxxxx), Mary
      Barnes (mary.ietf.barnes@xxxxxxxxx).

   This section pre-registers the following thirteen initial response
   codes as described above in Section 4.1:
   [ ... ]

Thank you for considering my comments.

Mykyta Yevstifeyev

19.02.2011 0:36, The IESG wrote:

The IESG has received a request from the Centralized Conferencing WG
(xcon) to consider the following document:
- 'Centralized Conferencing Manipulation Protocol'
  <draft-ietf-xcon-ccmp-12.txt> as a Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2011-03-04. Exceptionally, comments may be
sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the
beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.

The file can be obtained via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-xcon-ccmp/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-xcon-ccmp/



The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:

/ipr/472/
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