I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-uni-nni-02 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2010-12-21 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-23 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as in informational RFC. I have a small number of editorial comments that I think could further improve the draft if there is another round of editing. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Section 1, 1st paragraph: I suggest moving the expansion of MPLS-TP TP the first mention in the body of the draft. -- Section 1.1, 1st paragraph: More conventional in what context? Useful for what purpose? -- Section 1.2, definition of UNI-N I suggest expanding PE in the definition. -- Figures 1 and 2: Is the meaning of the various line types described elsewhere? If so, a statement to that effect with a reference would be helpful. -- Figure 2: I suggest expanding CP somewhere. _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf