Hi, I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-12-04 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There are some nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In the abstract the document starts with LoST, Please expand to Location-to-Service Translation 2. At the end of section 3.2 in the note, I think that the first "getServiceListBoundary" should be " getServiceBoundary" Roni Even |
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