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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For
background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last
Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010–10–25 IETF LC End Date: 2010–11–10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an
Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1.
In section 2 why not reference RFC 2119 or at least
copy the definition from RFC 2119 for the capitalized term. 2.
In section 3.9 when you say “if this technique is
used”, by this do you mean certificate –less or the flow defined in the
previous sentence. 3.
In section 4.6.3 the first paragraph defines the
requirements for Cryptographic
Binding. It looks to me like the rest of the section talks about a specific use
case, so why is it in the requirements section and not in section 3. Nits/editorial comments: |
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