Forwarded here at the request of one of the authors: -------- Original Message -------- Subject: Re: I-D Action:draft-klensin-iasa-policy-00.txt Date: Wed, 02 Sep 2009 17:10:32 +1200 From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@xxxxxxxxx> Organization: University of Auckland To: John Klensin <klensin@xxxxxxx>, "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> References: <20090824183001.3410B3A6E59@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> I think I agree with this document; these are editorial issues. There's a sequence in section 2.1 starting with the words "I think" that clearly needs rephrasing. Section 3: > In both cases, it may be useful to think of the "bouncing back" > process as as an appeal from the IASA to the Stream, but an appeal > that is explicitly This material appears to be duplicated just above, in slightly different words. > 5. Emergency Situations > > Emergencies can and do (unfortunately) occur. It is understood that > in an emergency, steps will be taken, and remedies applied. The > general rule is that if the Trust acts on an emergency basis, This surely applies to IASA as a whole, not just the Trust. Brian _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf