I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-as4octet-ext-community-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2009-06-30
IETF LC End Date: 2009-07-07
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. I have a
couple of comments that may be worth addressing if there is other
reason to revise the draft.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
-- Abstract: "...allows to carry
4 octet autonomous system numbers"
Missing word(s)?
-- Introduction
There's no motivational text. A paragraph describing (very briefly)
why you would want 4 octet extended communities might be helpful.
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