Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-rmt-bb-norm-revised-05.txt

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Elwyn,

Thank you. I have incorporated your editorial notes below into the xml source.

best regards,

Brian Adamson
adamson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx




On Jun 27, 2008, at 3:04 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote:

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-norm-revised-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date:  27 June 2008
IESG Telechat date: 3 July 2008

Summary:
Ready. This update has addressed all the issues I raised in my LC review excellently.

There are a couple of new and a couple of legacy editorial nits....

Editorial:
s2.4: s/specify use/specify use of/
s3.2.3.1, para 1, last line: s/provided/providing/
s8: s/George, Gross/George Gross/?
s5, end of para 3: s/if this acceptable/if this is acceptable/


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