Re: [lemonade] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt

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Black_David@xxxxxxx wrote:

>I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
>reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
>http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
>Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
>you may receive. 
>
>Document: draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt
>Reviewer: David L. Black
>Review Date: 15 April 2008
>IETF LC End Date: 16 April 2008
>  
>
Hi David,
Thank you for your review.

>Summary: 
>This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
>should be fixed before publication.
>
>Comments:
>This is a generally well-written draft on the CONVERT extension
>to IMAP.  All of these comments are minor nits.
>
>In Section 2, please remove this convention:
>   [[anchor3: Editorial comments and questions are marked like this.]]
>
Done.

>p.10 contains a couple of example email addresses.  Please use
>example.com, example.net or example.org as the domain.
>
Somebody else complained about this earlier, so I've already fixed this 
in my copy.

>In Section 11.1 are the To: and Subject: lines needed as part of
>the IANA registration?  If not, please remove them.
>  
>
They are a part of the IANA template in RFC 2506, so I would rather keep 
them

>In the IANA registration in Section 11.1, please ask IANA to
>replace RFC XXXX by the RFC number assigned to this draft.
>  
>
Ok.

>idnits 2.08.05 got confused by the square brackets used in IMAP
>syntax and reported a number of potential reference problems -
>there are no actual problems.
>  
>
Indeed.

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