David, Yes, I had noted the procedure in your mail. Thanks for making sure Regards, Jean-Pierre -----Original Message----- From: Black_David@xxxxxxx [mailto:Black_David@xxxxxxx] Sent: vendredi, 18. janvier 2008 15:54 To: Evain, Jean-Pierre; ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx Cc: lisa@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt Jean-Pierre, > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Please check with Lisa *before* you resubmit! Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- > -----Original Message----- > From: Evain, Jean-Pierre [mailto:evain@xxxxxx] > Sent: Friday, January 18, 2008 3:49 AM > To: Black, David; ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc: lisa@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt > > David, > > I have now inserted the Full Copyright Statement as in RFC 4748. > > I have adjusted the lines to the 72 character format. I'll > resubmit during > the day with a couple of other corrections. > > Regards, > > jean-Pierre > > -----Original Message----- > From: Black_David@xxxxxxx [mailto:Black_David@xxxxxxx] > Sent: vendredi, 18. janvier 2008 06:39 > To: Evain, Jean-Pierre; ietf@xxxxxxxx; gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc: Black_David@xxxxxxx; lisa@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt > > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt > Reviewer: David L. Black > Review Date: January 18, 2008 > IESG Telechat date: 24 Jan 2008 > > Summary: > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits > that should be > fixed before publication. > > Comments: > The minor open issue and most of the nits identified in the > Gen-ART review > of the -01 version of this draft have been addressed in the > -02 version. > > idnits 2.05.03 found two nits: > > Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated > by RFC 4748: > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > ** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5 > (updated by RFC > 4748) > Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a > matching beginning. > Boilerplate error? > > Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > ---------- > ---- > > ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, > the longest > one > being 2 characters in excess of 72. > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ---------------------------------------------------- > > ----------------------------------------- > ************************************************** > This email and any files transmitted with it > are confidential and intended solely for the > use of the individual or entity to whom they > are addressed. > If you have received this email in error, > please notify the system manager. > This footnote also confirms that this email > message has been swept by the mailgateway > ************************************************** > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > > _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf