This draft has not been revised since it was reviewed in August. It is still basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. An RFC Editor Note should be used to correct the bad section reference (see below), and the IESG should ensure that this correction is communicated to IANA, as it affects the registration that IANA will perform. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- -----Original Message----- From: Black, David Sent: Friday, August 24, 2007 10:08 AM To: Rohan Mahy; 'gen-art@xxxxxxxx' Cc: Black, David; 'Jon Peterson'; 'Richard Shockey'; 'Patrik Faltstrom'; 'Alexander Mayrhofer'; 'ietf@xxxxxxxx' Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-enum-calendar-service-03.txt I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-enum-calendar-service-03.txt Reviewer: David Black Review Date: 24 August 2007 IETF LC End Date: 6 September Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: This is a relatively straightforward registration of an ENUM service, and the draft does a good job of explaining the service that is being registered. I found one minor nit in the service registration (Section 2): Security considerations: See section 3. That should be "See section 4." as section 3 contains examples and section 4 is the Security Considerations. idnits 2.04.14 did not find any issues. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf