Hi! I started a review by going through the reference section. There seems to be some editing left to do... There are reference to old documents, including: RFC 2279 -> RFC 3629 RFC 1750 -> RFC 4086 There are normative reference to non-standards track RFCs, including: RFC 1641 RFC 1951 RFC 1991 (which documents is intended to obsolete?) RFC 2144 The following reference are never cited in the text as far as I can tell. Most of them should likely be removed, but citing [BLEICHENBACHER] at some appropriate point may be useful. [RFC1423] Balenson, D., "Privacy Enhancement for Internet Electronic Mail: Part III: Algorithms, Modes, and Identifiers", RFC 1423, October 1993. [RFC1641] Goldsmith, D. and M. Davis, "Using Unicode with MIME", RFC 1641, July 1994. [BLEICHENBACHER] Bleichenbacher, Daniel, "Generating Elgamal signatures without knowing the secret key," Eurocrypt 96. Note that the version in the proceedings has an error. A revised version is available at the time of writing from <ftp://ftp.inf.ethz.ch/pub/publications/papers/ti /isc/ElGamal.ps> [DONNERHACKE] Donnerhacke, L., et. al, "PGP263in - an improved international version of PGP", ftp://ftp.iks- jena.de/mitarb/lutz/crypt/software/pgp/ [MAURER] Ueli Maurer, "Modelling a Public-Key Infrastructure", Proc. 1996 European Symposium on Research in Computer Security (ESORICS' 96), Lecture Notes in Computer Science, Springer-Verlag, vol. 1146, pp. 325-350, Sep 1996. [RFC1983] Malkin, G., "Internet Users' Glossary", FYI 18, RFC 1983, August 1996. /Simon The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> writes: > The IESG has received a request from the An Open Specification for > Pretty Good Privacy WG (openpgp) to consider the following document: > > - 'OpenPGP Message Format ' > <draft-ietf-openpgp-rfc2440bis-19.txt> as a Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2007-03-27. Exceptionally, > comments may be sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please > retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > The file can be obtained via > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-openpgp-rfc2440bis-19.txt > > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi?command=view_id&dTag=4936&rfc_flag=0 _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf