Comment to the draft received from Tim Polk during review: > I thought I might follow up on the first unaddressed comment: > > I notice that the phrase "the Initial Archive Timestamp" frequently > appears in the text with a capitalized 'I' in word "initial". This seems > to indicate that there *is* something special about this timestamp, and I > would expect to find a definition in the terminology section. > > Perhaps a lowercase 'i' would more clearly indicate that it is simply a > subtype with the same structure? That is, if the phrase was "the initial > Archive Timestamp", I would only expect to find "Archive Timestamp" in the > terminology section. (Actually, the phrase appears with a lowercase 'i' > twice - once in section 1.2 and again in 5.2. I assume there is no > difference?) > > Thanks, > > Tim Polk Answer from I-D author: > Hi Tim, > > I agree with you, and follow your comment and will make sure in the final > revision of the draft that the word "initial" of the "initial Archive > Timestamp" only starts with a capital letter at the beginning of a > sentence. > > Thanks, Tobias _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf