Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-17.txt

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Document: draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-17.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 30/01/2007
IETF LC End Date: 21/01/2007
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary: Apologies for the late review - I missed the aassignment somehow.
This document is almost ready for the IESG. There are a couple of issues which need a little clarification IMO and the IANA considerations are suffering from 'a standard problem' - RFC 2518 defined most of things claimed to be needing registration as a result of this document so they are not actually new, but RFC 2518 didn't actually have explicit IANA considerations. Consequently the IANA considerations need to be rephrased to clarify that these are updated definitions rather than new. There are also some minor editorial nits that could get fixed during the update. Caveat: I have not made a detailed check of the syntax/semantics of the examples.

Comments:
Issues:

s4.3, para 2: 'Older clients will not break when they encounter extensions because they will still have the data specified in the original schema and MUST ignore elements they do not understand.' This specification cannot enforce compliance retrospectively! s/MUST/were required to/.

s6.6, para 3: 'notifications should be sent': Is this supposed to be a function of webdav? This is the only mention of lock notifications in the document.

Potential security implications of lockdiscovery: s6.8 requires a compliant server to support lockdiscovery and expects the response to this request to include the names of principals and potentially the lock tokens for locks being held on a resource. The privacy implications of this are discussed in the Security Considerations but it does not appear to be allowed to restrict or deny this request purely on security grounds. It is likely that some organizations might consider the ability to determine who holds locks is a sensitive matter beyond just issues of privacy, and the responses to lockdiscovery might be mediated by access controls.

s9.1: PROPFIND method: It is probably not a big deal, but the ability of 'new' servers to deny depth-infinity PROPFIND requests interacts with the suggestion that they should treat client requests without a Depth header as depth-infinity requests. This may result in a different response from a fully compliant new server as compared with a legacy RFC 2518 server. Is this likely to cause severe disruption to legacy clients?

Treatment of 'allprop': I believe that the various statements about which live properties will be returned by 'allprop' are not fully consistent. In the third bullet of s9.1 it is stated that allprop gets you 'property values for those properties defined in this specification' and offers the 'include' element as a way to increase the set of values returned. This interpretation is repeated in the examples (especially s9.1.6) and s14.2. However, the paragraph next but one after the bullets (split across the page 40/41 page boundary) states 'For a live property defined elsewhere, that definition can specify whether that live property would be returned in 'allprop' requests or not.' Finally Appendix F.1 states that the allprop semantics 'have been relaxed so that servers *may* [My emphasis] leave out live properties defined in other specifications'. So it appears that there are three different possibilities here - some clean up is needed.

s21 IANA Considerations:
The various items here do not require new registrations as they were all registered as a result of RFC 2518 (and RFC 4229). This document updates the registrations (and in a sense formalizes them since RFC 2518 did not have an IANA Considerations section explicitly). s21.1 should refer to RFC 4395 which controls the URI Scheme registry. s21.3 should refer to RFC 4229 which formalized the initial state of the message header field registrations. It occurs to me that I did not check if there are any message headers which were in RFC 2518 but are now dropped - if so this should probably be recorded here.

Editorial
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general: Check the capitalization of headings (e.g., s7.5.2).

s1, paras 9/10: s/new/extra/ (2 places) - they certainly aren't new in this specification.

s1, para 11: s/request and response/requests and responses/, s/all all/all/, move cross-ref to Section 17 to end of sentence.

s4.3, para 3: s/undefined), not multiple values/undefined); it does not have multiple values/

s6.1, item 4: This is the first appearance of the 'depth' concept and it isn't defined previously. I think something could be usefully added to the terminology section to introduce depth, and specially infinite depth.

general: various forms are used to refer to requests with 'Depth: infinite' attributes. 'infinite depth', 'Depth: infinite' and 'depth-infinite'. It would be good to be consistent.

s6.1, item 5: It would be good to clarify that locks (or at least their id's) are *globally* unique here.

s6.1, ietm 7: It would be helpful to quote If in this paragraph ("If") as this is the first occurrence of the term and it is a little confusing on first reading.

s6.2: s/Email/email/ (I think this is now the approved form).

s7.4, para 2: s/a write lock/any write lock/ (I was not sure initially if we were still talking about infinite-depth locks).

s8.6.2, para 2: For the less well-informed, it would be useful to explain the difference between weak and string Etags at the start of this discussion(or at least give an immediate reference). As is clear from the later words, finding a definition elsewhere is not simple!

s8.7: The use of DeltaV here is obscure. I understand it was a design team name.

s9.2: I think I know what 'document order' means but it isn't actually defined.

s9.6.1: I think it would be helpful to explicitly list which properties are not returned because of the way allprop is defined.

s10.7: The abbreviation LWS is not expanded until later.

s13, item 1: s/excecution/execution/






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