I am basically OK with this document. Some comments you may consider though: - Should you add aa [TODO] to section 5.1 which states that the editor of the document should describe the Textual Conventions (if any) in the MIB module? - I wonder if guidance is needed that they can leave out sect 5.1 if there are no TCs at all. - in Sect 5.3, would it make sense to advise to also describe the tables (and their relationships to each other)? I think that such would be useful. - In sect 5.3, it might be good to suggest that the editor explains how congestion control is addressed for notifications (as per RFC2914) Bert Wijnen > -----Original Message----- > From: The IESG [mailto:iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx] > Sent: woensdag 10 januari 2007 7:40 > To: IETF-Announce > Subject: Last Call: draft-harrington-text-mib-doc-template (A > Template for Documents Containing a MIB Module) to BCP > > The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter > to consider the following document: > > - 'A Template for Documents Containing a MIB Module ' > <draft-harrington-text-mib-doc-template-02.txt> as a BCP > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and > solicits final comments on this action. Please send > substantive comments to the ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by > 2007-02-07. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to > iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Note that the document includes a Normative Reference to RFC > 2629 which is Informational. This is a Downward Reference as > per RFC 3967. > > The file can be obtained via > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-harrington-text-mib- > doc-template-02.txt > > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi?command=vie > w_id&dTag=14807&rfc_flag=0 > > > _______________________________________________ > IETF-Announce mailing list > IETF-Announce@xxxxxxxx > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce > _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf