The IESG wrote: > <draft-ietf-lemonade-deployments-04.txt> as a BCP s/marjup/markup/ How about s/HTTP/HTTP or better HTTPS/ somewhere in 4 ? s/exist a large number/exists a large number/ in 8 (?) Please expand the first use of DMZ - I didn't know the abbreviation - but of course Google found it for me ;-) FWIW, I like that I-D. Frank _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf