Lucy and IAOC, I've reviewed the notes on the list, the FAQs, the Settlor agreements, and what I assume is the new 9.5 text. First of all, I'd like to express thanks to the IAOC for being willing to open the agreement up to community review, comment, and approval and for making changes that process seemed to call for. I think that, as the result of this process, critical provisions of the document are vastly better than they were and hope that the IAOC and the rest of the community agree. Some of the provisions of the current version are not what I would have preferred in a more perfect world. On the other hand, in such a world, I don't know whether we would have the Trust model at all and certainly would have preferred that the IAOC not spend a large fraction of the last year negotiating it. But this is not, as we all know, a perfect world. Given the actual world in which we live, it is as important to know where to stop, approve a document, and move on, rather than letting the quest for perfection drag things out and block other important tasks. It appears to me that we have reached that point. I would urge others to consider whether more discussion and tuning is really worth the possible benefits. The more recent discussion about the rights the IETF might have and want to grant seems largely irrelevant to the Trust agreement given the new wording (it did not appear irrelevant under the old agreement). It seems to me that the IETF (or the IASA, or either or both Settlors) might lay full or partial claim to two fundamentally different types of IPR: (i) Materials associated with the development, approval, or publication of standards. These are materials contributed to the IETF by its participants or prepared for the IETF, under contract or other arrangement, in support of those materials. Those materials now appear to be excluded from the scope of 9.5. I say "appear" under the IANAL disclaimer, but, if counsel has advised the IAOC that the wording is adequate, then I think that case is taken care of. (ii) Materials associated with, or developed as a consequence of, the operation of the IETF or administration of the standards process. Those materials might be developed under contract, or might include documents or tools contributed to the IETF to make its processes more efficient. These are the materials that appear to be covered under 9.5 now and, as far as I can tell, they are not covered at all by RFC 3979. Even in my most vivid imaginings, I cannot imagine a legitimate purpose for which another body would want most of that stuff, much less one under which a "share alike" provision would be clearly inappropriate. Exceptions might occur with tools or similar material contributed to the IETF, but the solution there is for the author to reserve some rights, giving the IETF/IASA only the right to use the tools and perhaps to modify them for specialized purposes. So while, in principle, I would prefer to see no restrictions on the choices the IETF might make, I don't see these restrictions as having any significant impact. So, from my point of view, while the IPR Licensing debate should continue in its own right, we have gotten past the point at which it has enough interaction with the Trust to justify holding the latter up. In conclusion, I think we have reached the point at which it is appropriate to approve this thing and get one with the standards-creation and definition business of the IETF. john _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf