Give the discussions after I posted this, I now have changed the
text in my edit buffer as follows:
<t>
The IASA is responsible for managing all intellectual
property rights (IPR), including but not limited to
trademarks, and copyrights, that belong to the IETF.
The IASA is also be responsible for managing the
ownership, registration and administration of
relevant domain names.
The IASA is responsible for undertaking any and all
required actions on behalf of the IETF to obtain,
protect and manage the rights that the IETF needs
to carry out its work.
</t>
Better?
Bert
> -----Original Message-----
> From: ietf-bounces@xxxxxxxx [mailto:ietf-bounces@xxxxxxxx]On Behalf Of
> Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> Sent: Monday, January 31, 2005 23:56
> To: Contreras, Jorge; Harald Tveit Alvestrand; ietf@xxxxxxxx
> Subject: RE: Perhaps clarify: #825 - IASA responsibilities
> regarding IPR
>
>
> Thanks. SO this is what I now have in my edit buffer:
>
> <t>
> The IASA is responsible for managing all IPR,
> including but not limited to trademarks, domain names,
> and copyrights, that belong to the IETF.
> It is responsible for undertaking any and all required
> actions on behalf of the IETF to obtain, protect and
> manage the rights that the IETF needs to carry out
> its work.
> </t>
>
> Bert
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: ietf-bounces@xxxxxxxx
> [mailto:ietf-bounces@xxxxxxxx]On Behalf Of
> > Contreras, Jorge
> > Sent: Monday, January 31, 2005 19:01
> > To: Harald Tveit Alvestrand; ietf@xxxxxxxx
> > Subject: RE: Perhaps clarify: #825 - IASA responsibilities
> > regarding IPR
> >
> >
> > >I suggest we change the text in section 3 from:
> >
> > > The IASA is responsible for undertaking any and all
> > required actions
> > > that involve trademarks on behalf of the IETF.
> > >
> > >to:
> > >
> > > The IASA is responsible for managing all IPR, including but not
> > > limited to trademarks, domain names, and copyrights,
> that belongs
> > > to the IETF. It is responsible for undertaking any and
> > > all required actions on behalf of the IETF to obtain,
> protect and
> > > manage the rights that the IETF needs to carry out its work.
> >
> > >I'm sure Jorge could phrase it better..... but I think the meaning
> > >is clear.
> >
> > That looks good. In line 2, "belongs" should be "belong",
> > but otherwise I don't have any other improvements.
> >
> >
> >
> >
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