RE: Monday consensus text: #725 Appealing decisions

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--On tirsdag, februar 01, 2005 01:04:39 +0100 "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

From Haralds latest text (below), the 2nd para reads:

    In the case where someone questions whether a decision or action of
    the IAD or the IAOC has been undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs
    or IASA operational guidelines (including the question of whether
    appropriate guidelines have been created or maintained), he or she
    may ask the IAOC for a formal review of the decision or action.

Rob and certainly I (when editing this) had to read this 2 or 3 times.
We think that the following (in our view) purely editorial change would
make it more readable:

      If a member of the IETF community questions whether a
      decision or action of the IAD or the IAOC has been
      undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs or IASA
      operational guidelines, or questions whether the IASA
      has created and maintained appropriate guidelines,
      he or she may ask the IAOC for a formal review of
      the decision or action.

OK?

Certainly OK with me.





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