--On tirsdag, februar 01, 2005 01:04:39 +0100 "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
From Haralds latest text (below), the 2nd para reads:
In the case where someone questions whether a decision or action of the IAD or the IAOC has been undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs or IASA operational guidelines (including the question of whether appropriate guidelines have been created or maintained), he or she may ask the IAOC for a formal review of the decision or action.
Rob and certainly I (when editing this) had to read this 2 or 3 times. We think that the following (in our view) purely editorial change would make it more readable:
If a member of the IETF community questions whether a decision or action of the IAD or the IAOC has been undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs or IASA operational guidelines, or questions whether the IASA has created and maintained appropriate guidelines, he or she may ask the IAOC for a formal review of the decision or action.
OK?
Certainly OK with me.
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