-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 On 2004-12-09, at 17.02, Bernard Aboba wrote: > Suggest this be rewritten to: > > "The IAOC is accountable for the structure of the IASA and thus decides > which functions are to be outsourced. All outsourcing must be via > well-defined contracts or equivalent instruments. Both outsourced and > in-house functions must be clearly specified and documented with > well-defined deliverables, service level agreements, and transparent > accounting for the cost of such functions." I think this is overkill. It is up to the IAD/IAOC to decide how to account for costs of outsourced contracts, so I would put a period after "service level agreements". - - kurtis - -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: PGP 8.1 iQA/AwUBQbnQ86arNKXTPFCVEQIuVgCg7PnKM/QvQmKnc0juGx4Twox4y6UAn3NQ t1DeWBqrp/c3bBRNvWQG06Fm =WA3w -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf