[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jose-fully-specified-algorithms-07

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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-jose-fully-specified-algorithms-07
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2025-03-07
IETF LC End Date: 2025-03-07
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a standards document.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 2 (please see below)

Nits/editorial comments:
1. Some of the wording is colloquial, for instance the following sentence in
Section 1: "For instance, with EdDSA, you do not know which of the curves
Ed25519 and/or Ed448 are supported!"  I do not know whether such colloquialism
is intentional, but if not, then the sentence can be re-worded as "For
instance, with EdDSA, it is not known which of the curves Ed25519 and/or Ed448
are supported." 2. Section 1: s/It furthermore deprecates/It further
deprecates/ (or Furthermore, it deprecates)


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