Reviewer: Nicolai Leymann
Review result: Ready
Hi,
I was assigned as the dnsdir reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8624-bis.
The document is on Informational Track and updates RFC8624. Purpose of the
draft is to move the algorithm implementation requirements and usage guidance
for DNSSEC from RFC8624 into a IANA registry. Goal is to allow easier updates
and simpler references to the list.
The document addresses a real problem, is easy to read and clear and I think
it's ready to progress.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits:
- Brief description in Table captions might be helpful; e.g. "Table 1: DNSSEC
algorithms registries" - Section 2:
○ "New entries add through the…" -> "
"New entries added through the…"
- Section 8:
○ I am not a native speaker but to me the use of the "serial comma" looks a
bit unusual and - according to wikipedia" - is optional and only used when
"writing out three or more terms":
"by Paul Wouters, and Ondrej Sury." ->
"by Paul Wouters and Ondrej Sury."
- A.1. - A.8.
○ Use of a full stop at end of bullet point is not consistent.
- A.4.
○ "based on discussions no the dnsop mailing list" ->
"based on discussions on the dnsop mailing list"
Regards
Nic
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