[Last-Call] Re: [DNSOP] Re: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06

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Hi Peter,

> On 2 Mar 2025, at 13:10, Peter Thomassen <peter=40desec.io@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> On 2/21/25 01:44, Tony Li via Datatracker wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Tony Li
>> Review result: Has Nits
>> OPSDIR review of draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-06
>> Reviewer: Tony Li
>> Disclaimer: I am not a DNS expert and I do not play one on TV. I have
>> not helped with DNS operations since the 1980's. I am not up to speed
>> on DNSsec. I'm sorry, but I cannot devote the time necessary to do all
>> of the background reading that is outlined in Section 1.
>> Overall: Ready, with nits
>> Section 3.2:
>>    It is also possible to publish child-specific records, where
>>    in place of the wildcard label, the child's FQDN with the
>>    parent zone's labels stripped is used.
>> Please reword.
> 
> This wording is the result of the WG reworking this sentence during WGLC [1]. The authors think that if we reworded this, it would not have WG consensus at this point -- so we'd prefer to keep it as is. Please let us know if that doesn't work for you!

I think that paragraph could be made easier to read without departing from the working group's consensus. 

For example:

"It is also possible to publish child-specific records where the parent zone's labels are stripped from the child's FQDN and the result is used in place of the wildcard label."

I find this a little easier to parse than the original, although clearly YMMV.


Joe

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