Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2025-02-12 IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-06 IESG Telechat date: 2025-03-06 Summary: This is an extension to DNS NOTIFY to support more than just zone transfers. It includes a mechanism to register endpoints to receive notifications. While I’m not deeply cognizant of the finer points of DNS, the proposal appears reasonable on the surface. There are some inconsequential nits that could be fixed. [Ready with nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: Page 12, section 6.2, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: I could not find the “DSYNC: Location of Synchronization of Endpoints” registry. Contrast that with section 6.1, where the requested type (DSYNC) is already registered! While the wording in section 6.1 doesn’t hurt, the wording in 6.2 could indicate to IANA that no further action is needed upon publication of this document as an RFC, which would not appear to be the case. Nits/editorial comments: Page 4, section 2.1, Scheme, 2nd sentence: change “8 bit” to “8-bit”. Page 4, section 2.1, Port, 2nd sentence: change “16 bit to 16-bit”. Page 10, section 4.3, item 1, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: change “occuring” to “occurring”. Page 10, section 4.3, item 1, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after “e.g.”. Page 13, Purpose: change “Use case” to “Use-case”. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
