[Last-Call] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-compact-denial-of-existence-06

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Reviewer: Antoine Fressancourt
Review result: Ready

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
draft-ietf-dnsop-compact-denial-of-existence-06.txt. These comments were
written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document
editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat
comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other
Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT
Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as YES or
NO OBJECTION.

The document is very clearly written, and understandable.

A (very) minor remark I have about the document is that, regarding the
presentation of the DNS record, I would better present how those records are
structured (Which field is where), for instance in sections 3.1, 3.4 or 4.
Besides, the DNS record example in section 4 is not readable in printed
versions of the document (Yes, I am old school).


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