Hi Carlos, Thanks for this review, see below. On Tue, Feb 4, 2025 at 10:25 AM Carlos Jesús Bernardos via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Reviewer: Carlos Jesús Bernardos > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for > draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. These comments were written > primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and > shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments > from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last > Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, > see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. > > The document is well written and I have not found any INTAREA related issues. Thanks. > Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO > OBJECTION. > > The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements) > with the document: > > - “Virtual Area Netwokrs” —> “Virtual Area Networks”. > - “both modens and routers” —> “both modems and routers”. Sorry, will fix the above. > - “Routers may have limits” —> is this “may” intended to be lowercase or should > it be uppercase? (just checking to be sure). Similar question with “queues > might not be supported”. I think lower case is appropriate. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e3e3@xxxxxxxxx > Thanks for writing this document. > > Carlos -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
