Reviewer: Carlos Jesús Bernardos Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. The document is well written and I have not found any INTAREA related issues. Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO OBJECTION. The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements) with the document: - “Virtual Area Netwokrs” —> “Virtual Area Networks”. - “both modens and routers” —> “both modems and routers”. - “Routers may have limits” —> is this “may” intended to be lowercase or should it be uppercase? (just checking to be sure). Similar question with “queues might not be supported”. Thanks for writing this document. Carlos -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
