Reviewer: Nicolai Leymann Review result: Ready with Nits Hi, I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs. For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir There was an extensive early review for the document: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/PxPDGSbOIPpX320CwTLdEZHlvho/ Summary: The draft extends the use of DNS NOTIFY which is described in RFC1996. it received significant discussion on the mailing list based on the early review and the authors took care of all comments and updated the document accordingly. All issues raised during the first review and on the mailing list were addressed. Overall I think the document is ready to be moved to the next step - thanks for the good work and thanks for listening to the feedback from the working group. Nits: 4.1: "the notification sender MUST perform the following procedure:", the following description refers to steps, for consistency it might be better to rephrase as "... perform the following steps". 4.1: "and another query for city.ise.mie._dsync.jp is then required;" Should be a "." instead of a ";". 6.2: "RRtype Lists an RRtype that is defined for use.", usage of "." not consistent in the list. 8: "." at end of list missing. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
