Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-13 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2025-01-16 IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-27 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: Appendix D.2 talks about defined sets, and it offers four categories (prefix sets, protocol sets, port number sets, and ICMP sets). Then, Appendix D.2 talks about aliases, and it offers examples of five categories (prefix, protocol, port number, FQDN,and VLAN IDs). I was expecting some discussion about when to use a defined set and when to use an alias. Maybe someone more familiar with YANG would find this discussion sufficient, but I felt that a bit more discussion would be helpful to me. Nits: IDnits points out that some lines are too long: ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 2 characters in excess of 72. IDnits points out some outdated references: == Outdated reference: A later version (-22) exists of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-21 -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
