Hi Yu,
Thank you for your review. Your suggestion is good. We will shorten the introduction of access-network SAV.
Thanks,
Lancheng
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Subject: Re: [savnet] Last Call: <draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09.txt> (Source Address Validation in Intra-domain Networks Gap Analysis, Problem Statement, and Requirements) to Informational RFC
Hi,
I have reviewed this document. I think this document is almost ready for publication to Informational RFC. I would suggest that the second paragraph of Section one should be modestly cut. This paragraph introduces the existing access-network SAV mechanisms (e.g., SAVI) instead of intra-domain SAV mechanisms (e.g., uRPF). But access-network SAV is not the topic of this document. To highlight the topic of this document (i.e., intra-domain SAV), I think a shorter background on access-network SAV in the second paragraph would be better.Thanks
Best,Yu
fuy186@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxFrom: The IESGDate: 2025-01-04 03:42To: IETF-AnnounceCC: draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement; james.n.guichard; savnet-chairs; savnet; song.xueyan2Subject: [savnet] Last Call: <draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09.txt> (Source Address Validation in Intra-domain Networks Gap Analysis, Problem Statement, and Requirements) to Informational RFCThe IESG has received a request from the Source Address Validation inIntra-domain and Inter-domain Networks WG (savnet) to consider the followingdocument: - 'Source Address Validation in Intra-domain Networks Gap Analysis,Problem Statement, and Requirements'<draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09.txt> as InformationalRFCThe IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits finalcomments on this action. Please send substantive comments to thelast-call@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2025-01-17. Exceptionally, comments maybe sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginningof the Subject line to allow automated sorting.AbstractThis document provides the gap analysis of existing intra-domainsource address validation mechanisms, describes the fundamentalproblems, and defines the requirements for technical improvements.The file can be obtained viahttps://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement/No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.--savnet mailing list -- savnet@xxxxxxxxTo unsubscribe send an email to savnet-leave@xxxxxxxx
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