Jim Fenton <fenton@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Makes sense. I was guessing at whether manufacturer was plural or
> singlular. I guessed plural because it sounded like MASA signs for
> multiple manufacturers, and it was describing the overall set of those
> relationships.
A single Authorized Service might well operate on behalf of multiple
manufacturers, but it would tend to be be multi-tenant. A manufacturer could
well have contracted with multiple MASA.
Let's leave it as singular.
> On 30 Nov 2024, at 15:05, William Atwood wrote:
>> Actually, since a specific MASA signs a specific pledge on behalf of a single manufacturer, the use of "manufacturer's" is correct. However, it would be clearer if "the" were inserted before "manufacturer's".
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On 11/30/2024 5:37 PM, Jim Fenton via Datatracker wrote:
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>>> Reviewer: Jim Fenton
>>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>>>
>>> I am the designated artart reviewer for this draft.
>>>
>>> Thanks for addressing all of my comments on -12. They are all addressed in the
>>> text with the exception of my question on why this is separate from
>>> ietf-anima-rfc3866bis, which was answered on the mailing list. This draft is
>>> ready to go with the exception of a few tiny editorial nits:
>>>
>>> Section 1, paragraph 1 move (BRSKI) and (SZTP) inside the quotes since that is
>>> part of the titles of the RFCs.
>>>
>>> Section 1, paragraph 3 "as enhancement of" -> "as an enhancement of"
>>>
>>> Section 2, definition of voucher: "statement from Manufacturer" -> "statement
>>> from a Manufacturer"
>>>
>>> Section 2, definition of MASA: manufacturer's -> manufacturers'
>>>
>>>
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