Reviewer: Martin Duke Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@xxxxxxxx if you reply to or forward this review. This document is built on other documents that standardize the collection of delay statistics in networks (e.g. IOAM, RFC 9326) and the delivery of telemetry to a collector (IPFIX, RFC 7011). It provides a standard way to define an express a delay in IPFIX packets. The metric definition is taken from RFC7679, and is therefore not new to this spec. Although I have my concerns about congestion related to Direct Export as a technique, they are not specific to this draft. This document could use an editorial review for clarity. Sentence fragments like "The timestamp when the packet is being received at OAM encapsulating node." are hard to parse. The Introduction was really unclear and I had to read it a few times to understand what this document was doing, despite a basic conceptual familiarity with IOAM. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
