Hi Yaron,
Thank you for you comments. We've discussed your initial comments, and expanded Security Considerations section further in the latest version https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-mna-usecases/. It would be most helful, if you can suggest how to further improve that section.
Regards,
Greg
On Thu, Sep 19, 2024, 22:34 Yaron Sheffer via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer
Review result: Has Nits
This is a repeat review of the document after I complained about the lack of a
Security Considerations section in -12.
I'm fine with the new Security Considerations section which basically points to
another document and asserts that the considerations there apply to this
document. But the wording is hard to parse and the whole section needs
copyediting even though it's just a few sentences. The first sentence, in
particular, could have been improved with the addition of another verb.
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