Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer Review result: Has Nits This is a repeat review of the document after I complained about the lack of a Security Considerations section in -12. I'm fine with the new Security Considerations section which basically points to another document and asserts that the considerations there apply to this document. But the wording is hard to parse and the whole section needs copyediting even though it's just a few sentences. The first sentence, in particular, could have been improved with the addition of another verb. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
