[Last-Call] Re: [Anima] Re: Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12

Eliot Lear <lear@xxxxxxx> · Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:40:07 +0200



    Hi Thomas,
    Again, congratulations
        on a well written document.  I'm not looking for the full blown
        use case, but just the input that produced that output.  Test
        vectors.  That's it.
    Thanks,
    Eliot

      
    On 17.09.2024 08:25, Werner, Thomas
      wrote:

    
        Thanks
            for your feedback, Eliot!
         
        With
            respect to the
          examples
            nits, the focus of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher is on
            voucher objects.
        More
            concrete use cases should be described in other
            specifications, e.g., draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm
         
        Best
            regards
        Thomas
         
        
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                    Betreff: Iotdir last call review of
                    draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12
              
              
                Reviewer: Eliot Lear

                    Review result: Ready with Nits

                    
                    This draft describes a JWS-protected RFC-8366
                    voucher.  It is well written and

                    clear.

                    
                    Major issues:

                    
                    None.

                    
                    Minor issues:

                    
                    None.

                    
                    Nits:

                    
                    I would prefer a more complete test vector in the
                    examples.  That is, could you

                    provide the inputs that produced them?

                    
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