Thanks for your feedback, Eliot!
With respect to the
examples nits, the focus of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher is on voucher objects.
More concrete use cases should be described in other specifications, e.g., draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm
Best regards
Thomas
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Betreff: Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12
Reviewer: Eliot Lear
Review result: Ready with Nits
This draft describes a JWS-protected RFC-8366 voucher. It is well written and
clear.
Major issues:
None.
Minor issues:
None.
Nits:
I would prefer a more complete test vector in the examples. That is, could you
provide the inputs that produced them?
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