Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area Review Team (ART-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-raw-technologies-10 Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review Date: 2024-09-10 Summary: Almost Ready for publication. This document presents a series of recent reliable and available wireless technology evolutions. It is very useful. The document is very long, and there still have some nits. It needs further improvments. One suggestion: Every section in sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 has the subsection"summary". How about adding a new section "summary" which tries to summarize all sections from 4 to 7? Best Regards Jiankang Yao -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
