Rich, Got it. Change the wording per your suggestion in the next revision. Thank you. Linda -----Original Message----- From: Salz, Rich <rsalz@xxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Monday, September 2, 2024 4:18 PM To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>; art@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; rtgwg@xxxxxxxx Subject: Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41 > In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list of terms? I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well. Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document" I was surprised to see definitions for "commonly used terms" :) -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
