> In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list of terms? I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well. Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document" I was surprised to see definitions for "commonly used terms" :) -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
