[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2024-08-15
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues:
    While it may be vacuous, it is necessary to include a security
    considerations section.

Minor issues:
    (Unclear if this is Major or Minor): The table layout for the IANA registry
    fails to conform to I-D / RFC requirements.  Considered as text, it is much
    too wide.  Considered as HTML, the normal rendering blocks important parts
    of the table.  I recommend asking the RPC and IANA how to format the I-D so
    as to produce a suitable RFC.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A


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