On Mon, Jul 22, 2024 at 9:23 AM Yoav Nir via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Has Nits
I have previously done an early secdir review on this draft:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-secdir-early-nir-2022-10-08/
For the most part, I stand by what I wrote then. The document is very well
written and provides a thorough analysis of security and privacy. It is now
section 8 rather than 7.
As for the nits:
* "MLSCiphertext" has been renamed to "PrivateMessage". It is still used
without having previously been defined within the document
It is defined inline in S 2.1.
. Still only a nit
because it is defined in RFC 9420. * Section 7.2.3 (now 8.2.3) still defines
"deniability" only to assert that MLS "does not make any claims with regard to
deniability", which is still strange.
I think this is OK. the point is that this doesn't claim to have a property that people may want.
* The superlative language ("extremely",
"very") has been toned down. Thanks, although I still think that "clients have
the extremely important role" is a strange way of saying SHOULD.
Addressed in https://github.com/mlswg/mls-architecture/pull/264
-Ekr
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