Reviewer: Yoav Nir Review result: Has Nits I have previously done an early secdir review on this draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-secdir-early-nir-2022-10-08/ For the most part, I stand by what I wrote then. The document is very well written and provides a thorough analysis of security and privacy. It is now section 8 rather than 7. As for the nits: * "MLSCiphertext" has been renamed to "PrivateMessage". It is still used without having previously been defined within the document. Still only a nit because it is defined in RFC 9420. * Section 7.2.3 (now 8.2.3) still defines "deniability" only to assert that MLS "does not make any claims with regard to deniability", which is still strange. * The superlative language ("extremely", "very") has been toned down. Thanks, although I still think that "clients have the extremely important role" is a strange way of saying SHOULD. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
