[Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-14

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Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Has Nits

I have previously done an early secdir review on this draft:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-mls-architecture-09-secdir-early-nir-2022-10-08/

For the most part, I stand by what I wrote then.  The document is very well
written and provides a thorough analysis of security and privacy. It is now
section 8 rather than 7.

As for the nits:
* "MLSCiphertext" has been renamed to "PrivateMessage".  It is still used
without having previously been defined within the document. Still only a nit
because it is defined in RFC 9420. * Section 7.2.3 (now 8.2.3) still defines
"deniability" only to assert that MLS "does not make any claims with regard to
deniability", which is still strange. * The superlative language ("extremely",
"very") has been toned down. Thanks, although I still think that "clients have
the extremely important role" is a strange way of saying SHOULD.



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