Sorry for the garbled subject. I am re-sending the reply with subject
intact for easy tracking
Thanks a lot for the comments
Version 16 addresses the comments
See #Ahmed
On 2/28/24 7:36 AM, Ben Niven-Jenkins via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review result: Has Nits
Hello,
I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir
Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.
Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review Date: 28th February 2024
IETF LC End Date: Not known
Intended Status: Proposed Standard
Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be
considered prior to publication.
Comments:
The draft is well written and the scenarios and solutions described in the
draft are understandable and easy to follow.
Major Issues:
No major issues found.
Minor Issues:
The paragraphs at the bottom of the introduction section provide good summary
of each section but skips over (does not provide a summary for) sections 8, 9 &
10. Was this intentional?
#Ahmed Version 16 provides a summary for sections 8, 9, and 10
Nits:
Section 1 - Acronyms lists TLDP as "TLDP: Target Label Distribution Protocol."
s/Target/Targeted/
##Ahmed: We no longer need to use this acronym and we use "Targeted
Label Distribution Protocol" only once . So it is removed from the
acronyms section.
Thanks
Ben
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