Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-rift-yang-14 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2024-06-24 IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-21 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document defines the YANG data model for RIFT issues: - The definition of "PoD" in the document differs from its common usage in the industry. Typically, a PoD represents a self-contained, modular unit that includes all necessary components such as compute, storage, and networking resources. - The document has two sections labeled "Terminology" (Sections 1.1 and 1.3). Consolidating these into a single section would improve clarity and reduce redundancy. - Need to add references to Clos, ThreeWay Adjacencies, and Fat Trees. Thanks, Linda Dunbar -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
