Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2024-06-12 IETF LC End Date: Already complete IESG Telechat date: 2024-06-20 Summary: Not Ready Major Concerns: RFC 7116 is an Informational RFC, and this document, if approved, will be published an an RFC on the standards track. It is very unusual for a standards-track RFC to update an Informational RFC. I suggest that this document and a companion document ought to obsolete RFC 7116, where the companion document separately handles all of the non-ipn topics in RFC 7116. The companion document can be an informational RFC. Minor Concerns: None Nits: Section 5.5: s/security source EID for/security source for/ -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
