[Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08

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Reviewer: Julian Reschke
Review result: Ready with Nits

This is well-written and easy to review.

Nits:

- In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-2.2,
the text could use <blockquote>. - In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-4-1,
the reference to the previous section could be a link - In
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-halpern-gendispatch-antitrust-08.html#section-8,
the references might be improved to include author/org information (currently
this is only implied by the choice of reference anchor names)


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