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Hi Sue,
All good catches! Thanks for the review.
Ron
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Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Has Nits This is an OPS-DIR Last Call review. This review should be considered as one of the Last Call comments Status: Ready with Nits General Comment: I commend the authors for writing up the requirements for this experiment with compressed routing headers. I look forward for reports on this experiment. NITs: 1. Abstract: Why: English Grammar - Clarity of sentence Current text:/ Another purpose is to demonstrate that the security considerations, described in this document, can be addressed with access control lists. / Suggested alternate text:/ Another purpose is to demonstrate that access control lists can address security considerations described in this document. / #2. Section 1, paragraph 3. Why: Grammar, Sentence punctuation and clarity Old text:/ This document describes an experiment whose purposes are: * To demonstrate that the CRH can be implemented and deployed. * To demonstrate that the security considerations, described in this document, can be addressed with access control lists. * To encourage replication of the experiment./ New text:/ This document describes an experiment whose purposes are: * To demonstrate that the CRH can be implemented and deployed, * to demonstrate that access control lists can address the security considerations described in this document, and * To encourage replication of the experiment. / #NIT 3: Section 10, Textual Representation Description of problem: This section does not inform the reader why the textual representation description is needed. Possible text to be added to section 9 or 10:/ PING and TRACEROUTE report 16-bit SIDS for CRH-16, and 32-bit SIDS for CRH-32. It is recommended that the experimental reports use the text representations described below./ |
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